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1. Thesis: your main insight or idea about a text or topic,
and the main proposition that your
essay demonstrates. It should be true but arguable (not
obviously or patently true, but one
alternative among several), be limited enough in scope to be
argued in a short composition and
with available evidence, and get to the heart of the text or
topic being analyzed (not be
peripheral). It should be stated early in some form and at
some point recast sharply (not just be
implied), and it should govern the whole essay (not
disappear in places).
2. Motive: the intellectual context that you establish for
your topic and thesis at the start of your
essay, in order to suggest why someone, besides your
instructor, might want to read an essay on
this topic or need to hear your particular thesis argued—why
your thesis isn’t just obvious to all,
why other people might hold other theses (that you think are
wrong). Your motive should be
aimed at your audience: it won’t necessarily be the reason
you first got interested in the topic
(which could be private and idiosyncratic) or the personal
motivation behind your engagement
with the topic. Indeed it’s where you suggest that your
argument isn’t idiosyncratic, but rather is
generally interesting. The motive you set up should be
genuine: a misapprehension or puzzle
that an intelligent reader (not a straw dummy) would really
have, a point that such a reader
would really overlook. Defining motive should be the main
business of your introductory
paragraphs, where it is usually introduced by a form of the
complicating word “But.”
3. Evidence: the data—facts, examples, or details—that you
refer to, quote, or summarize to
support your thesis. There needs to be enough evidence to be
persuasive; it needs to be the right
kind of evidence to support the thesis (with no obvious
pieces of evidence overlooked); it needs
to be sufficiently concrete for the reader to trust it (e.g.
in textual analysis, it often helps to find
one or two key or representative passages to quote and focus
on); and if summarized, it needs to
be summarized accurately and fairly.
4. Analysis: the work of breaking down, interpreting, and
commenting upon the data, of saying
what can be inferred from the data such that it supports a
thesis (is evidence for something).
Analysis is what you do with data when you go beyond
observing or summarizing it: you show
how its parts contribute to a whole or how causes contribute
to an effect; you draw out the
significance or implication not apparent to a superficial
view. Analysis is what makes the writer
feel present, as a reasoning individual; so your essay
should do more analyzing than
summarizing or quoting.
5. Keyterms: the recurring terms or basic oppositions that
an argument rests upon, usually literal
but sometimes a ruling metaphor. These terms usually imply
certain assumptions—unstated
beliefs about life, history, literature, reasoning, etc.
that the essayist doesn’t argue for but simply
assumes to be true. An essay’s keyterms should be clear in
their meaning and appear throughout
(not be abandoned half-way); they should be appropriate for
the subject at hand (not unfair or too
simple—a false or constraining opposition); and they should
not be inert clichés or abstractions
(e.g. “the evils of society”). The attendant assumptions
should bear logical inspection, and if
arguable they should be explicitly acknowledged.
6. Structure: the sequence of main sections or sub-topics,
and the turning points between them.
The sections should follow a logical order, and the links in
that order should be apparent to the
reader (see “stitching”). But it should also be a
progressive order—there should have a direction
of development or complication, not be simply a list or a
series of restatements of the thesis
(“Macbeth is ambitious: he’s ambitious here; and he’s
ambitious here; and he’s ambitions here,
too; thus, Macbeth is ambitious”). And the order should be
supple enough to allow the writer to
explore the topic, not just hammer home a thesis. (If the
essay is complex or long, its structure
may be briefly announced or hinted at after the thesis, in a
road-map or plan sentence.)
7. Stitching: words that tie together the parts of an
argument, most commonly (a) by using
transition (linking or turning) words as signposts to
indicate how a new section, paragraph, or
sentence follows from the one immediately previous; but also
(b) by recollection of an earlier
idea or part of the essay, referring back to it either by
explicit statement or by echoing key words
or resonant phrases quoted or stated earlier. The repeating
of key or thesis concepts is especially
helpful at points of transition from one section to another,
to show how the new section fits in.
8. Sources: persons or documents, referred to, summarized,
or quoted, that help a writer
demonstrate the truth of his or her argument. They are
typically sources of (a) factual
information or data, (b) opinions or interpretation on your
topic, (c) comparable versions of the
thing you are discussing, or (d) applicable general
concepts. Your sources need to be efficiently
integrated and fairly acknowledged by citation.
9. Reflecting: when you pause in your demonstration to
reflect on it, to raise or answer a
question about it—as when you (1) consider a
counter-argument—a possible objection,
alternative, or problem that a skeptical or resistant reader
might raise; (2) define your terms or
assumptions (what do I mean by this term? or, what am I
assuming here?); (3) handle a newly
emergent concern (but if this is so, then how can X be?);
(4) draw out an implication (so what?
what might be the wider significance of the argument I have
made? what might it lead to if I’m
right? or, what does my argument about a single aspect of
this suggest about the whole thing? or
about the way people live and think?), and (5) consider a
possible explanation for the
phenomenon that has been demonstrated (why might this be so?
what might cause or have
caused it?); (6) offer a qualification or limitation to the
case you have made (what you’re not
saying). The first of these reflections can come anywhere in
an essay; the second usually comes
early; the last four often come late (they’re common moves
of conclusion).
10. Orienting: bits of information, explanation, and summary
that orient the reader who isn’t
expert in the subject, enabling such a reader to follow the
argument. The orienting question is,
what does my reader need here? The answer can take many
forms: necessary information about
the text, author, or event (e.g. given in your
introduction); a summary of a text or passage about
to be analyzed; pieces of information given along the way
about passages, people, or events
mentioned (including announcing or “set-up” phrases for
quotations and sources). The trick is to
orient briefly and gracefully.
11. Stance: the implied relationship of you, the writer, to
your readers and subject: how and
where you implicitly position yourself as an analyst. Stance
is defined by such features as style
and tone (e.g. familiar or formal); the presence or absence
of specialized language and
knowledge; the amount of time spent orienting a general,
non-expert reader; the use of scholarly
conventions of form and style. Your stance should be
established within the first few paragraphs
of your essay, and it should remain consistent.
12. Style: the choices you make of words and sentence
structure. Your style should be exact and
clear (should bring out main idea and action of each
sentence, not bury it) and plain without
being flat (should be graceful and a little interesting, not
stuffy).
13. Title: It should both interest and inform. To
inform—i.e. inform a general reader who might
be browsing in an essay collection or bibliography—your
title should give the subject and focus
of the essay. To interest, your title might include a
linguistic twist, paradox, sound pattern, or
striking phrase taken from one of your sources (the aptness
of which phrase the reader comes
gradually to see). You can combine the interesting and
informing functions in a single title or
split them into title and subtitle. The interesting element
shouldn’t be too cute; the informing
element shouldn’t go so far as to state a thesis. Don’t
underline your own title, except where it
contains the title of another text.
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